Thursday, July 29, 2010

Gig Poster - Devin

Hey, so this is it.

I had some trouble making the bubble letters round on top, but I think the point gets across. I also tried adding some background elements, like sunflowers, but I found it too distracting from the text. Is the comp too simple?

Devin.

2 comments:

  1. I love this one way more than the old version. Quick question though, doesn't a bubble blower have ridges on the inside too?

    http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3287/3014383916_53596deca5.jpg

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  2. I think this is a real improvement on your previous comp, but those damned hard edges on the bubbles are hurting the feel of the piece. I know you had some font issues, so I can't beat on ya too much here. I was wondering if adding some simple bubbles (spheres) might help sell the idea?

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