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So this is my final draft for the name text assignment. I know the background and foreground is a little flat, and the yellow texts is a little funky. However, I was more or less trying to figure out exactly what I was doing so that I may improve more in the future.
I like the beginning... it's clean and slick, but i think the over all timing lags. think 5 -8 seconds!! And the font for your name is too much. I would go with something simpler without all the bevel. Your name is long anyway, so making it as readable and digestible as possible. Think the clean white lines route. Maybe you name can be a route?
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