Hey guys! I posted my rough cut animatic on Vimeo. Sorry for the wait. I shaded most of the media to give it a more drawn look.. I like it better than the original photo take. I know the plant isn't moving, but I'm working on it :)
Please give me some feedback if you feel the need.
Devin.
Hey Devin -
ReplyDeleteI see now better what you are going for. I enjoyed the time lapse effect of the background with the music. My favorite part is the build of the factory in the background. The foreground feels strange with the cartoon plant and the limp grass.... though I find the grass to be the most intriguing. I want you to work more on the 3D aspect of the project and pushing yourself to come up with something interesting. Don't leave it for last. If you have a beautiful growth of the plant - the rest will fall int place. Also, please use other trees in the background -- they look like plug and play generic 3d trees.
Hope this helps!
Ashley